My very first attempt - A new life

[MrB8 Senior Member Member of the Month Nov 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close MrB8]

Hey

I woke up this morning with a weird/new feeling, I wanted to try and write something for this particular forum.

Being a complete and total noob, I don't expect this to be good for anything, especially that all I could put together didn't even border 500 words.

Please Let me know what you think, even if not that welcoming

My plan is to post whatever I get, updating this thread.

Thanks.

[MrB8 Senior Member Member of the Month Nov 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close MrB8]

Opening the door of their new house to a new life ahead, both thought as he moved behind his bride and carried her between his arms, taken by surprise, she screamed laughingly let me down, he kissed the tip of her nose as they crossed the threshold and with his leg he closed the door behind them, finally we are alone, they giggled, it was a long day, at the wedding reception. Lovely as it was, they both longed for this together time at last.

Following a flowers trail while still held in his arms up the stairs and to their bedroom, she wrapped her arms around his neck, loving how his hands feel encompassing her body, holding her safely so close to his chest, he stopped for a moment lost in her deep grey eyes, as her hand moved to his head running her fingers through his hair, feeling each other’s breath so closely their lips gently touched for a brief moment before he proceeded to their bedroom.

Everything was well prepared, candles lit, flower petals covering the floor drawing a big heart shape with their initials on the bed, she looked around then back to him and smiled then kissed him for a second before he gently lowered her down, it felt different for her to stand on her own feet again after what felt like her whole life being in the arms of the man she loved and just got married to, his hands have not left her body entirely, as he helped her out of her wedding dress, taking his time unveiling the gorgeousness that is his beloved wife.

He placed his palms around her beautiful face, slowly approaching, she felt his warm breath as she closed her eyes and slightly parted her lips welcoming his kiss, instead he run the tip of his tongue around her lips then he took her cupid bow between his lips and kissed it before returning back to teasing her lips with his tongue, then he lightly bit her lower lip between his lip covered teeth pulling out gently until they slip his “love bite” repeating the whole thing twice, grabbing his head forward to hers she sticks her lips to his and they open mouth kiss, his hands trail from her neck down all the way down her spine to her butt cheeks, as held her firm buttocks in his hands she yelps in surprise breaking their kiss for a split second, moving his hands up again to the small of her back, drawing her closer as he moved his kisses down to her chin then her alternating between her neck and ear lobes, placing gentle lip bites as he moves around whispering “I love you baby”. Moving his left hand massaging her belly and up to her breasts briefly every now and then while the palm of his right hand roamed her back and buttocks, tickling her spine with his fingertips.

[someone_like_u Retired ModeratorPEGym Hero Find all posts View Profile Close someone_like_u]

Woot woot! That's what I'm talking about MrB8. Great intro. to a continuing story I hope (hint hint). Can't wait to see how this unfolds. Love it so far

[MrB8 Senior Member Member of the Month Nov 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close MrB8]

Thank you so much SLU!

Glad you enjoyed it

More to come then, I hope

[Steneo Senior MemberPEGym Hero Member of the Month Dec 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close Steneo]

Woot woot! That's what I'm talking about MrB8. Great intro. to a continuing story I hope (hint hint). Can't wait to see how this unfolds. Love it so far

Oh there is NO WAY this ends with a kiss and a little "love massage"

[Steneo Senior MemberPEGym Hero Member of the Month Dec 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close Steneo]

Although I confess that it really doesn't resemble my wedding night in the slightest...we had quite a nice hotel suite where we simply collapsed with exhaustion and the knowledge that we had to get up at 4 am to make our flight to Hawaii...so lame! You story already has more heat and it hasn't even really started!

Anyway,

Awaiting further installments

[MrB8 Senior Member Member of the Month Nov 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close MrB8]

Barely breaking their loving embrace, they moved to the bed, laying on her back, he’s beside her on one side leaning on her with her hands in his hair, only his chest is on top planting gentle kisses on her nose, down to her lips then chin, licking and nibbling as he goes down in a straight line kissing her neck all the way down between her breasts then back to her neck again, the contrast between the warmth she felt and coolness after he returned up again increased her desire for more, and more came but to her lips! She opened her mouth invitingly to his kisses, he wasn’t going to tease her more, with their tongues peaking touching tips, his withdrew a bit to lick the insides of her upper lip hugging it between his tongue and lip while her tongue was still tipping what she could touch!

Her hands feeling his chest circling the short hair with her fingers, until he went liking his way down to her belly each hand cupping one of her breasts with an occasional circling of his fingers around her areola or tip touching her nipples, he could hear her breath getting faster as she became more excited, placing random kisses to her sides backing up to her bosoms, placing his mouth on the left breast without taking his hand off the right one, repeating the encirclement motion but this time with his tongue, stroking her left nipple before changing places, now he is kneading the left with his hand while his mouth pleasures her right breast. Applying some light suction around the areola with his tongue still stroking and teasing her now hard nipple he gently pulls out making a popping sound and eliciting a moan from her mouth, three times he did that before moving again to her left breast, to go over and again with what he just did.

As her excitement raised, her hands moved down trying to reach for his penis, but he had other plans, he looked at her with a smirk and proceeded to kiss his way down to her navel, licking, nibbling and kissing around it then moving more south, doing the same on her pubes, she parted her thighs for him as he started to pay them more attention, right then left, from the outside to her inner thighs, kissing and gently biting with an occasional brushing against her outer labia, and the “accidental” breath on her clitoris. He felt her moving her hips and began to get closer to her blossoming flower.

Licking around her labia majora, she could feel his beard tickling her inner thighs as he moved, then he shifted focus to her inner labia taking each in his mouth and gently suck on it while his tongue rubs the delicate flesh, not too long before he did the same to the other lip then he took both plump lips in his mouth and played with his tongue around and between them, sucking them in and out like a spaghetti without taking his eyes off her face the whole time, not before long he was kissing the hood of her now not so shy clitoris, peeking out to say hello to the welcomed lover.

Wetting his lips with his tongue before he kissed the tip of her luv bud, then down to the lips and up once more to the hood, then he cupped the whole vulva with his mouth and gently sucked it inside his wet and warm mouth all while his tongue played hide and seek with her excited vagina, tasting her sweet arousal juice that drove him crazy with lust, mmm, he murmured as he savored the ever deliciously tasting cream, with her aroma filling his nostrils. His hands traveling around her body feeling her buttocks, her thighs then her sides and belly, he tried to reach up to her breast without breaking contact, their hands met, interconnecting fingers, they moved around her breasts while his tongue was right between her clit and it hood, it didn’t take long before she started to shake, her whole body was convulsing, locking her knees tightly around his head as a powerful orgasm overtook her body, feeling her clitoris throb in his mouth as well as her plump lips, he didn’t stop, just shifted focus to her inner labia after her orgasm subsided, as kept sucking on them amusing himself with the great experience she now shared together, he knew this is only the beginning of their first night.

[getinbig Senior Member Member of the Month March 2015 Find all posts View Profile Close getinbig]

whew...I'm glad I'm on my way home...hopefully I can get something like this going with my beautiful bride!
Great stuff MrB8!!! You have talents we didn't all know about here. Please keep the posts "coming"...

[MrB8 Senior Member Member of the Month Nov 2013 Find all posts View Profile Close MrB8]

Really! thanks a lot for the encouragement, and best wishes for you and your bride man!

P.S. I just love it when men call their wives "My Bride" it makes me soooooo happy! thanks for that too.

[getinbig Senior Member Member of the Month March 2015 Find all posts View Profile Close getinbig]

Thanks again for your continuing encouragement, MrB8!
God does all things well. He designed marriage to be a most special union. PEGYM and friends like you are helping me improve that oneness that I have with this most precious and beautiful woman...my bride and truly my best friend forever! So thankful I found my way to the Gym!